Virginity Vanquished

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We were Adam and Eve in our evening Eden.
I slowly stroll the dog around the streets, sweating somewhat. You sweetly showered as I stood in silent suspense. You softly slid beside, a sassy sensual surprise.
I swiftly stripped your sleep slip seeking to satisfy my special sweetheart. My clothes came completely off with our combined collaboration. You slipped my shorts and maybe bared my briefs.
I delighted in diligently delivering your desires, profoundly pleased to provide you passionate pleasure.
I excitedly explored your exposed elegance; I devoured your delicious dainty dessert as you masterfully massaged my manhood, your manual ministrations making me mighty. I found felicity fondling your flushing furrow, feasting on your fantastic feminine food. I teased by taking my tongue to your thighs, then turning to torridly taste your tumultuous treasure again, as your hand heated and hardened me so I could hardly hold my humid hose from a hurried hurricane. I drew away and redoubled my readying of your redolent redoubt.
You softly state your satisfaction and said I should slide inside. You brought your beautiful butt before me, beckoning business from behind.
I worried as I worked my wand within your womanly warmth. My entry was ecstasy not excruciating, my penetration pleasure not pain, you proclaimed.
You pulsed and pushed, positioning for proper placement of my potent probing. I balmed your back and fondled your fruits as I freed your flower in our flaming full festival.
Your sighs signal your satisfaction, your moans a measure of our magic mating.
I gasped as I gave you my gooey gift and we continued our close contact, now calmly comforted.

Our romantic relations are royally reborn, we rejoice in our reunion.
We arise adults again, you making me a man; I waken the women within you. The boy banished by blissful bounty, the girl gone, her garden grown in golden glory.
Our verdant voyage has vanquished our virginity.

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
I almost wanted to re-write this

I think there's an actual solid poem in this jumble of alliteration. You'd have to pare many lines and forget the fun word searches. I love alliteration, but you're sort of past heavy handed with it here and in all the poems I've read from you. If you'd like real feedback on this poem, I'd suggest take it to the message board, but they're kinda babies over there when it comes to commenting on the work of others. If you email me via my feeback I'd be glad to go over the poem with you.