Vision 7.31.14

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 06/07/2023
Created 08/02/2014
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susansnow
susansnow
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I saw his head sweat with wet between
my legs I was on his back and I could
almost smell him. We were making love
or I was making love and all I want to do
is lie close against his moist skin. I want
to lick the salt from his body taste the
effort taste the want and then I will
kiss him. I saw him. He came to me
I dropped a spoon he’s coming. Or he’s
dead. It's all voo-doo child and a rabbit
vibe on a blue bed of flesh fantasies.

susansnow
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susansnowsusansnowover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

All the feedback is great. I appreciate it.

todski28todski28over 9 years ago
agree with trix

It fleshes together like those moments in the throes of passion, just odd that you ended up on his back, then the vibrator...... Where did he go......

Ok so I'm just teasing very sexy imagery and very well weighted to tie back to your title, be interested in what you classify as erotic :p

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
Love it

It has that dream/vision flow and feel. Smoothly moving from one picture to the next without feeling disjointed. Very nice.

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