Visitor to Inner Space

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Visitor to Inner Space


The heart does a footfall hear . . .

Long was the dark winter of waiting
And now
When the sun does shine
There is no thaw

The heart does beat, but with a dead beat


Icicles of fear imprison
The impulse to reach out and know
There is no reason to feel
And be the lesser for having felt

Within
There is naught
But a void
Towards the inner reaches of my self
Don’t, please do not essay

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amansamansabout 20 years ago
Cold

"the icicles of fear imprison". There is much to this poem, but what has my spine chilled is the knowledge.

Aaao_NaaaAaao_Naaaabout 20 years ago
Self-effacing

Anyone who can pen these words isn't likely to have a void in the inner reaches of their self.

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Interesting Piece, Odeee

... it resonates regret, but seems a bit ambivalent, too. I found that somewhat jarring at first, but am liking it more with subsequent readings. :)

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