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- Waiting
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Trembling fingers
Lifting the blinds, waiting
Gazing outside, through the rain
Impatient, restless, fluttering heart
Fingertips brushing through hair,
Smoothing fabric
A bitten lip, breathless
Anticipation
Of him
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GuiltyPleasureover 16 years agoThis is nice........
...but it feels like an appetizer promising more to come, hopefully. You convey the nervous excitement well in a bare-bones way, I'd like to see it more fleshed out.
Tess
