Wake of the Golden Leaf

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She's from Winston-
Salem out of Wrightsville
propelled by the cough
of a million dead lungs

signed on as a lad
Zippo uniform
pack in rolled up sleeves
bad breath and attitude

forty years of puffin
boiler room atmosphere
crew becoming smaller
ports of call disappearing

jumped ship the other week
nervous and insecure
AWOL from a bad habit
withdrawal a lonely voyage

Bought by tobacco
sailed for greed and grief
gone but for her wake
ghost ship Golden Leaf

(YO! HO! HO! Quit two weeks ago.)


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BooMerengueBooMerengueabout 20 years ago
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Good job, Spike! Wish I could quit! Wish I could write about it if I did! Thanks!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Great Work!

I quit last Thanksgiving and this expresses the feelings so well! It does get easier-hang in there!

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Very good

on quitting and on the poem. A dancing rhythm here. Well done.

jim : )

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