Warble

byLesseloovesPeter©

mind a jumble
swingin' jungle
thoughts a wish a wash a tumble
don't wanna fumble
darkened tunnel
watch out! a trip a trap a stumble
nagging grumble
afraid to crumble
drat! a fold a crease a rumple
living life's trouble
brain made humble
listen! a sniff, a laugh trimphal

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by todski2809/27/13

I bet

there are tons of typos in my work lol, just something I saw, since it was the last word on the page I tried to look it up :-)

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by LesseloovesPeter09/27/13

oh tod

You're right. Damn typos! (which should actually be "Damn Lesse's inability to proof read!")

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by todski2809/26/13

Sweet beat

you set up for a readers treat,

Is trimpal a word?? or should it be triumphal?

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by Ashesh909/26/13

Very

Enjoyumple !!!

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by Oldbear6309/24/13

Drat!

I'd like to take a tumble in that swingin' jungle jumble!

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