Wayward Tears Echo Once

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Wayward Tears Echo Once

                                          - Une poésie pour deux voix


The scarlet rose            
         La rose d'écarlate
is nuzzled in the dark      
         est nuzzled dans l’obscurité
         wayward tears            
                   larmes de wayward
         shed in silent passion            
                   hangar dans la passion de silent
trickle from the bud            
filet du bourgeon

waver
         hésitez
         then fall
                   puis chute

From where I sleep            
         D'où je dors
I hear their hollowness      
         J’entends leur creux
         echo once                  
                   faites écho une fois
         remembering the tears      
                   rappeler les larmes
I’ve twice shed in love      
         que j’ai deux fois le hangar dans l’amour

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LiarLiarover 19 years ago
I'll bet...

...it would had been magnificent if I had known French. Not it's just bloody good. :)

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
love the echo

of the second language.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in fridays review

Miss OatlashMiss Oatlashover 19 years ago
Beautiful!

Absolutely stunning!

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Cool

I really liked the French (it is French right?) - that was nifty, fit well with the poem. Very cool!