We move as one, for all eternity

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I've asked that they would bury us together
in top-to-tail, a single grave of sucking,
eternities of sixty-nine forever:
one funeral of final fond face-fucking;
and so in death as life you'll always thrill me
as when my cock beneath your fingers grew
and swallowed you as fast as you could fill me
as all the time I emptied into you;
above the rainbows swallowing your seed,
in death my tongue shall still caress your head:
still somewhere in the stars, renewed indeed,
a heavenly as in an earthly bed:
and I am hard for you, and you for me.
We move as one, for all eternity.

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A COUPLE IN LOVE

needing never to part. TK U MLJ LV NV

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
again, I steal

a prior comment. What 1201 said, plus I add this,,,

a heavenly as in an earthly bed:

in the above line, should a be an?

I liked your rhythm, your rhyme was pretty good, I enjoyed it, it made me smile, thinking of the situation.

~ maria

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
Well,

that was different, rather well done. 5