- Non-Erotic Poetry
- We Touch
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Click hereLEMONIA /(F) FLIP EDELTRAUD => TO HAVE AND HAVE NOT
AVRA
TUESDAY MORNING
11/2/2014
WE TOUCH
We touch,
We may not get as much,
But still we touch,
Distant in light years still we touch,
There is not any consciousness as such,
But still we touch.
You're there,
I don't know you anymore,
But you are there,
Pass-time habit on this shore,
For me to stare,
As your illumination grows more and more,
You are still there.
And I'm here,
You don't know me anymore,
But I'm still here,
Dreaming of you in every season of the year,
Pass-time habit till all things become more clear,
Out of the blue again one day you will appear,
I'm still here.
We touch,
There is not any hope for us as such,
But still we touch.
- COMMENTS
pelegrinoabout 10 years agoAuthorThanks for the feed back, folks.
I mainly write about "Edeltraud", or for her edification and it is in the form of a saga. That is why I always put before my writings the general title, chapter title and song cycle title and also place and date. I try to make them readable as individual pieces, but reading them in the structured way I mean them to be read, is still unfinished work for me as the tale still develops. Probably in the future I will start a thread giving some kind of structural notes and the titles in chronological order, to make easier the reading of my saga.
buttersabout 10 years agoyou seem to be developing a more restrained touch, saying less but saying more at the same time. the echoing of each phrase within individual stanzas leaves the residual message that lingers:
but still we touch
you are still there
i am still here
but still we touch
it's a poignant, quite lovely message
