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Click hereA little rain must fall to clear the air of sorrow
To wash away the pain and heartbreaks of tomorrow
A little wind must blow to cool and calm the anguish
Breezes wafting in where sadness came to languish
A little cloud must form to hide the tears of worry
Shadowing the aching that caused the pain to flurry
A little snow must flutter to cleanse the mind so bitter
Freezing all the anger; leaving happiness to glitter
A little sun must shine to finish what it started
To rebuild hope and spirit when love up and departed
yet another lovely piece!!
is this a form as well?
I would only suggest that you break up your lines to give the reader a pause, a breath, otherwise, an excellent work, congrats :)
NJ