- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Weeping
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Biding grief, eventually fades into the tides.
Nevertheless, when I least expect it,
a wave brings it back where I'm still learning
how to swim. I nearly drown, nearly,
but I hold my breath, wading to land.
- COMMENTS
normal jeanover 10 years agoanything drown you without putting it into words. You are tender and soulful in your writing, a quality I have always admired. This is a lovely metaphor, as I know how hard it can be to wade through grief as tight as quicksand.
~NJ
Maria2394about 12 years agohas been mentioned in the new poem recommend section of the poetry forum. Thank you for your submission and keep up the good work!
Here is the link-
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=40196908#post40196908
~ maria
