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This is my first attempt at posting anything that I write….please be nice :)
Wet
Wetness does not always pertain to water
in an ocean, river or lake;
Sometimes it refers to how I feel
when I remember your embrace.
I only have to think of you
to remember me in your arms;
My legs quivering, my mouth moaning
I have fallen captive to your charms.
I long to feel your body on mine
to know the taste of satisfied love;
To lie quietly in your arms
we fit together like a hand to a glove.
You are the sweetheart of my life
you are my one sure bet;
You never have to wonder babe . . .
you can always keep me wet.
- COMMENTS
doormouseover 19 years agoto double post...
I just read some of the comments left..
What annaswirls said hon... they're fantastic in the poetry forum. I'd never written poetry before, they bent over backwards to help. You won't find a nicer bunch of people, nor will you find better advice.
See you there hopefully.
doormouseover 19 years agoI think every female reader will be able to relate to this lol
Awesome job hon... made me want to wake my partner ;-)
Anonymousover 19 years agoLike beauty, the title of a piece conjures up an image in each reader's mind. Some may see it as you do, others quite the opposite as the reactions posted clearly show.
I'll bet your intended had no trouble in defining your intent.
Poetry per se is not my favorite, but I'll watch for your next postings.
Brandi2449over 19 years agoYour right in your bio you should stick to what your good at.
Frank Steinalmost 20 years agoTake the poem as it was written and enjoy on that level. If I were the person the poem alludes to nothing could make me happier than to read it with the author.
