- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Wet Dream
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Mon Dieu!, his dream was a wet
Mediterranean pied-à-terre
at nine o'clock in the morning
where a naked Genevieve
sat at a kitchen table crying
because Marie who wasn't hungry
pulled on his brilliantine hair,
screaming his name in ecstasy
at midnight after thirty-five years
next to a wide awake Ethel.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerabout 6 years agoAuthorThank you, Senna, for your comments. I always find them thought provoking. I never looked at the title through the lens you mentioned, but you’re right. At the very least it conjures an image of an adolescent.
I hadn’t thought about negation that way either. “wasn’t hungry” isn’t a strong image. I began thinking about “gnawing on a croissant” or something similar. At the very least I’m going to review my library of poems for similar examples.
You help me become a better poet. Thanks again.
Senna Jawaabout 6 years agoDear GM, please, remove all the comments which have nothing but a link spoiled by a line break or blank. Here is a respective tiny link:
https://tinyurl.com/GM3ladies
Sorry for all this, thank you,
tazz317about 6 years agowhile the tears at the table flow. TK U MLJ LV NV
Senna Jawaabout 6 years agoThe link the last time was correct except for the Literotica editor inserting a blank into URL by itself. Use these links by first removing the spurious blank. Just in case, I'll post the link again, it will not hurt:
http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=88619783
Good luck,
Senna Jawaabout 6 years agohttp://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=88619783
