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Wet Silk Against Naked Skin

byMagnetron©

All you want to do is to take a shower
While she's been in there for over an hour
Certainly by now, she should be
Rubbed raw
And
Squeaky clean

Instead
She's still busy playing with herself
Pretending to be
A lingerie fashion show queen

Wet silk against naked skin
A feeling so naughty
It almost qualifies as sin

Quite the quandry
You find yourself in

Only a meager
Three by three foot cubicle
Nonetheless,
One more room seized from your control

In your eagerness to please her

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by pelegrino06/06/14

Beautiful staff, Magnetron,
One person describing so sensually the sensuality of another!
It's a big turn on in my mind, and it doesn't matter if control is lost of rooms or complete bastions.
There ain'tmore...

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by Magnetron06/06/14

See? This is one of the reasons for starting the Bring It On thread. I never figured this poem would be so well received.

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by greenmountaineer06/06/14

Great title (I think titles are important); liked the way you re-enforced it half way through the poem. Nice diction, a little bit of rhyme.

The reader can do a lot with "almost qualifies as sin". Verymore...

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by twelveoone06/05/14

you really push it

to the line!
what can I say, and this takes two reads (at least)
5ed
I wish I had wrote.

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by Oldbear6306/05/14

This one grew on me

At first I wanted to make a smart aleck comment about enjoying the show, but...
then I realized I knew the feeling. Nicely done

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