- Erotic Poetry
- What Are You Waiting For
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Kiss me softly. Kiss me slowly.
Kiss me hard. Kiss me passionately.
Put your hands on my face and look into my eyes.
Please, just kiss me, and make me feel those butterflies.
Take me now. I want to feel you inside of me.
Denying what I want is slowly killing me.
Do what you want, and I will scream your name.
I can't help playing this secret seductive game.
I need you now. I need you to be mine.
I want to feel our bodies intertwine.
Kiss me now. What are you waiting for?
You might lose your chance, and I'll be out the door.
- COMMENTS
prettygirl35almost 12 years agoAuthorThank you for your comments and suggestions. As a new writer I can use all the help I can get. I don't take it as critisism I just take it as a learning experience. :)
Maria2394almost 12 years agois to find a way to say all these things in a manner that has not been said on Literotica ten thousand times in exactly the same way. I can tell you have passion and I am not being mean, but you need to read more poetry, use some words that aren't so terribly overused. I did not vote, but wanted to give you a bit of advice. I can feel you have passion, but that alone does not make a good poem. I wish you the very best. Look around Lit and find some of the excellent erotic poets that exist here and learn from them. Keep writing!
~ maria
