what do you see

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what do you see when you look in the mirror?
do you see all your hopes? do you see all your fear?

Do you see the real man that you are today?
Or only the one you plan to be some day?

Do you see magic that glints in your eyes?
Do you see the tears you can't help but cry?

what do you see when you look in the mirror?
do all of your features become much clearer?

do your eyebrows lie flat? does your hair fall right?
do you hate your nose? your crooked overbite?

Do you see the beauty that lies deep inside?
Do you see the woman who, from the world, hides?

do you see your crimes etched into your visage?
or only your carefully crafted image?

What do you see when you look in the mirror?
Do you see all my hopes? Do you see all my fear?

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Yep -

I would agree.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor
a teacher?

Only of life, Oldbear, only of life.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Are you a teacher, Lesse?

So many lessons.

theoncomingstormtheoncomingstormover 10 years ago

this is my favorite of yours so far... I think you were taking a peek into my mind. :-) Thank you for sharing!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
do U see ur crimes etched into ur visage ?!?

or only ur carefully crafted image ???????!!

Immortal Lines , Lesse , wish all politicos asked themselves this Question !!! 5-ed