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Click hereI want to go to the ocean,
And climb the highest dune.
I want you to undress me,
Beneath the summer moon.
I want to stand under the stars,
Held tight in your embrace,
I want to drink in your lust,
As you remove my gown of red lace.
I want to surrender my body,
To your every need and desire.
I want to be a willing victim.
Of your burning, passionate fire.
I want to taste the kisses,
From your soft and tender lips.
I want to feel the shivers,
From the touch of your fingertips.
I want to lie beneath you,
And feel the heat from your skin.
I want you to lift my soul,
To heights it's never been.
I want to be left breathless,
Begging and pleading for more.
I want to spiral into ecstasy
As you rock me to the core.
Nice structure, good thoughts;
but
(don't you just hate that word!)
it sounds too much like a set of instructions overlaying constrained passion - let yourself go, melt the pages you write upon!
You present nice pictures,
just a lil repetitive.
I like the emotion I feel
here also. *Smiles*
More Please ~