tagNon-Erotic PoetryWhat's the Point?

What's the Point?

byUncle Pervey©

What's the point of the whole point system,
When points gained are always disappearing?
The way they go aare just like "Black Magic,"
It makes you glad that you're "God Fearing!"

I for one have had my ups and downs,
And a fluctuating count movement,
I've gone from 4 points on some poems to three,
And from that point there's no improvement!

I've found some changes from 3 to two,
It stampedes my growing confusion!
Sometimes this act makes me really wonder,
If it's just me or mass confusion!

I've dropped from two points to one on some,
The lost point just seems to go no where!
It sometimes gets downright disheartening,
This "eluding" act doesn't stopped there!

Although this sounds like I'm a whiner,
Or someone with a screw or two loose!
I'm not what you'd call a real sniveler,
My poor brain feels like it's just been sluiced!

I've gone from just one to nothing, but,
What blocks my brain like an impeder!
How do these first points make their appearance,
When there's not even been a reader??

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