- Non-Erotic Poetry
- what's the rush
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Click here polarized in numbness
urge for life holds
no arousal
enticements
just another sham
from a flim flam man
mind fastened to slumber
as eyes trace patterns
gridlocked
in chambered abyss
response just a parody
of paralyzed annoyance
sinking into tunnels
of jaded reflection
fantasy may suggest
I forsake this day
- COMMENTS
Wanton Vixxxenabout 19 years agoblue, this seems to have caught you on a "blue's down day", but you know you're not alone <smile> You captured every familiar disappointment's emotion in this poem of love con artists. See? Now you've put Me in the mood to go find one, lure him to My dungeon and make an honest man of him - the unrushed, hard way! <wicked little grin> Great job, blue!
Vixxx
duckiesmutabout 19 years ago"enticements
just another sham
from a flim flam man"
I read this section over and over in my mind, like it was on loop, and the more I read it, the more I enjoyed it.
The rhythm reminded me of that scene in the cave from Dead Poets' Society...or...um...perhaps that's just me. :)
