What's Wrong With Ya?

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Dark rewrite of Rihanna's Disturbia

Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb

What the hell is wrong with you?
Why did you do this to me?
Boy, you have gone crazy somehow

No more chances left for this love gig
Don't even get me started
Nothing you say is gonna be heard
Nothing else is left to be said
Can't even think about it
How you turned our romance on its head
Don't wanna take a second look at it
This time for sure we are done
Feels like I've been slowly going insane
Yeah
Boy, what's happening to you?

Like a thief in the night
It seems to have grabbed a really hard handful of you
Creeped up inside to crush all that used to be good in you
Consumed you
A disease of the warped has taken away the good man that was once mine
Boy, if you keep on letting it control you
I really think I'm gonna have to leave you
Because it's getting just too close for my comfort

Throwin' on my brake lights
Baby, you never should have hit your girl
Darlin, if you ain't gonna play
Than you better watch out
Because I got some bad, bad boyz from my hood
Eager to put you down deep
Six feet under
Better think twice
Alter your woman bashing train of thought
So best not to falter
Instead, boy, be wise
Admit there's something bad wrong with you
It's like the darkness has become your light
Admit it
Boy, you must know it
There's something bad wrong with ya
Yeah yeah
Baby, you're really scaring me tonight
Admit it
There's something bad wrong with ya
Ain't who you used to be
Something wrong
Wrong with ya
Wrong with ya

Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb

Taking down and burning
Every last one of our pictures on the wall
Don't you dare keep following me
Buggin' me
Because I'll just be disconnecting your call again
Take back all the flowers and bling bling
Boy, it ain't gonna change not one damn thing
I just wanna get out
Tossin' you and all your shh out
Because it's getting just too close for my comfort

Like a thief in the night
It seems to have grabbed a really hard handful of you
Creeped up inside to crush all that used to be good in you
Consumed you
A disease of the warped has taken away the good man that was once mine
Boy, if you keep on letting it control you
I really think I'm gonna have to leave you
Because it's getting just too close for my comfort
You act just like a monster


Throwin' on my brake lights
Baby, you never should have hit your girl
Darlin, if you ain't gonna play
Than you better watch out
Because I got some bad, bad boyz from my hood
Eager to put you down deep
Six feet under
Better think twice
Alter your woman bashing train of thought
So best not to falter
Instead, boy, be wise
Admit there's something bad wrong with you
It's like the darkness has become your light
Admit it
Boy, you must know it
There's something bad wrong with ya
Yeah yeah
Baby, you're really scaring me tonight
Admit it
There's something bad wrong with ya
Ain't who you used to be
Something wrong
Wrong with ya
Wrong with ya
What the hell is wrong with ya

Release me without another bruise or hateful curse
Done trying to maintain
Done struggling
Time here at last to let you go go go
Because if I don't I think that I really will go oh oh oh

Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb
Dumb dumb de-dumb

2009 Ramona Thompson

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