- Erotic Poetry
- When You're a Little Sour
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Click hereI've been put to sleep by you
I've been severed red by you
and drowned underwater
and layed out in the hail
and you think you're so unseemly
with that little wiggle, hand to hip
but there's a heart drawn
from me to you 'round your neck
and you always seem to play with it
when you're so unbearable
that your high-heeled shoes aren't
nearly high enough to poke me
eye to eye and it's true that I love you
like something sweet, especially
when you're a little sour
- COMMENTS
Safe_Betabout 15 years agoYou need to get this poem edited. You might consider submitting it to the "Poetry in Progress ~ construction zone" thread in the Poetry Discussion & Feedback forum and have it critiqued. This could be really good, but it needs some more work. Heres a link to the forum BTW: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=254058
