Where You Take Me

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tongue tips dancing
swift laughter deliciously upon
our lips
full and swollen
pressing passions wet embrace

heart beats
breath jagged
hottly lavish your wet kisses
tenderly splash over my ample breast

kiss my navel
drunk upon the scent
caress my sex
tasting deep my delight.....
and i
  touching the silky firmness of you
   takes to me the joy you share
     drunk i am in your purfume, your salted taste
   intoxicated
           in the swirling depths
                  where you intensely release me.


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f-cynyrf-cynyrover 18 years ago
strong images.

you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
strong images.

you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
first line

tongue tips dancing ..luv the alliteration...grabs the reader ..as the rest runs in waves of sensual moments...nice..welcome...bluerains

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Another newbie!

Welcome to the world of Lit.

A good first read,

now let me see

what else you've writ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I don't know why,

but you're poems really resonate with me. The imagery is clear, sparkling even. I like in this one the sense of love between the physical descriptions!

I look forward to more from you!

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