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Click heretongue tips dancing
swift laughter deliciously upon
our lips
full and swollen
pressing passions wet embrace
heart beats
breath jagged
hottly lavish your wet kisses
tenderly splash over my ample breast
kiss my navel
drunk upon the scent
caress my sex
tasting deep my delight.....
and i
touching the silky firmness of you
takes to me the joy you share
drunk i am in your purfume, your salted taste
intoxicated
in the swirling depths
where you intensely release me.
you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.
you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.
tongue tips dancing ..luv the alliteration...grabs the reader ..as the rest runs in waves of sensual moments...nice..welcome...bluerains
Another newbie!
Welcome to the world of Lit.
A good first read,
now let me see
what else you've writ...
but you're poems really resonate with me. The imagery is clear, sparkling even. I like in this one the sense of love between the physical descriptions!
I look forward to more from you!