- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Whisper
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Click hereThey whisper ever on
Alway's whisper
never caring
They ruin lives
They laugh with glee
Suffering is their joy
Forever more they go on
Spreading their whisper
never caring
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agoa bit of tightening up. You'll want to drop the apostrophe on always in the first stanza, and you might consider rewording that last stanza a bit, it seems to stumble some. Read it outloud and modify until it feels fluid. The emotion here is clear, just need a little cleaning.
jim : )
