Wild One

bybethanie155©

They always said I was a wild girl.
A wisher, a believer,
A hopeful, careless dreamer.

Those words were true then. They are true now.
Not a wild girl, but now a wild woman.
A whole lot of angel, and just a little bit of demon.

My hair, it tumbles free. My jeans, they tattered and worn.
My lips are soft and wet...ready for yours,
They will kiss for as long as yours can endure.

I love with my soul. I love without abandon.
You will wish you had never met me.
I'll take your heart, keep it for ransom.

You will never forget the day that you met me.
I'll live inside your dreams.
I'll love you and kiss you and fuck you and break you.

I will be your everything.

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by JWren08/04/14

Challenging

I agree with Tsotha about the two blips, but the message is received. This is both a promise and challenge, a submissive seeking and warning a lover.

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by Koba01/26/14

Hmmmmm.....Come to Me!

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by bethanie15501/22/14

Thank you for your feedback!
I'm usually very careful when it comes to grammar, so I'm going to blame those errors on the fact that this was a spur of the moment, middle of the night submission. I ammore...

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by Tsotha01/22/14

I like the first stanza. It's a nice opening.

The message in your poem comes across pretty strong. I like your choice of words, and the format, these short, direct sentences. They seem to create a resonance.more...

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by cavu18201/22/14

very evocative .. when do me meet? I can't wait...

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