wish and vision before sleep

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I have memories
able to hold in my hand
passed back and forth
left to right to other
like our kisses,

your tone is always
peace with lust
lady of dream as well
as imagine wakeful
pulling forward,

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jenny_katytdidjenny_katytdidalmost 4 years ago
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I always loved that you left with a comma not a period or question mark.... comma

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
A subtle beauty here...

such gentle language frames this relationship. Very nice...

jim : )

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Wishy watchy

Which is the wish and which the vision?

I like the first stanza much more than the second.

"I have memories

able to hold in my hand

passed back and forth

left to right to other"

Good lines.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
this will stay

eyes closed

wakeful, almost

words take me back rewind into dreams

imagining scenes over

changing hands again and again

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