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Click hereI have memories
able to hold in my hand
passed back and forth
left to right to other
like our kisses,
your tone is always
peace with lust
lady of dream as well
as imagine wakeful
pulling forward,
I always loved that you left with a comma not a period or question mark.... comma
such gentle language frames this relationship. Very nice...
jim : )
Which is the wish and which the vision?
I like the first stanza much more than the second.
"I have memories
able to hold in my hand
passed back and forth
left to right to other"
Good lines.
eyes closed
wakeful, almost
words take me back rewind into dreams
imagining scenes over
changing hands again and again