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While at first a symphony
Bodies clash creating cacophony
Returning again into harmony
My moans coming audibly
Your power seizing me bodily
Feeling your strength solidly
Tensing into you unconsciously
Joyfully on this odyssey
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twelveooneabout 13 years agoThis is a liitle more clever
than meets the eye
end line Noun,noun,noun, 4 adverbs (I think), noun. I'm not sure how effective, coupled with the front start. Clever. People react more to verbs and nouns. A 5. Liked the thinking behind the pattern.
