With You Without M

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Dar~
Dar~
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Lonely apartment
I can't call it home.
With you without me
I feel so alone.

Jingle bells Jingle bells
ring on my door
with you without me
I need you so much more.

Dreamy delusions
Call in my sleep
With you without me
I pray my heart you'll keep.

Footsteps in the hallway
I run to the door.
With you without me
It's not you anymore.

Phone thinly ringing
I run to it's call
With you without me
your voice is my all.

Dar~
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
clever

;love the way this read, excellent poem!

BelegonBelegonabout 19 years ago
Nice image here...

I think this is a common "missing" behavior that is less often addressed in poetry and this is an effective way to state it...

Footsteps in the hallway

I run to the door.

With you without me

It's not you anymore.

I am prone to this imaginative deception that the missed love one's car is pulling into the driveway, hearing keys jingle, etc.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Sad.

Perfectly conveys the feelings of distance and loneliness.

angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Wow!

Provocative! Keep up the good work hon! ~Minx

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