Non-Erotic PoetryWithdrawingEvery day I withdraw a little more
Every day I pull further away
Every day I give you a little less
Because I'm leaving and you can't follow
My heart has packed its bags
My brain is shutting down
I try not to care about what's behind me
I don't want to imagine your disappointment
In me...
It's all become too much to bear
Too lonely, too hard, too wretched
Too many fears, too little hope
I can't fight it anymore
It's like watching a plane take off
For some great place I was supposed to go to
But I talked myself out of it, making excuses
And now I regret my bad choices
I keep saying now's the time to give up...
But is it?
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Dips and flows
Ups and downs are part of everyone's life. It's never too late to change directions if you can see you're heading in the wrong one.
I read all your stories and poems and watched your progress here. Maybe this isn't your best work but it's honest. Truthfully, you worry me. You are going through a sad period of your life but it's only a small piece of it. Don't give up writing. Don't give up loving either even if it hurts. Best wishes.
~Lyn~more...
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that thinks about structure, a new writer, ok some of it is bad, but here is the best part, you'll get better. from what i see you are trying to at the beginning of the lines and within the stanzas, you'll get better quickly
good luck
4 for effortmore...
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