- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Within
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I really don't know how to begin,
Except to say that you're within.
Within my heart and in my mind,
Plus my body all the time.
You walk the chambers of my heart.
It's hard for us to be apart.
You prowl the corners of my mind.
No wonder you're on it all the time!
You're in my body through mind and heart
But not when I'm alone and we're apart.
Your tongue against mine when we kiss
Only is a small part of this.
Your fingers intertwined with mine.
You are so tender and very kind.
You really are within, you see,
So very much a part of me.
- COMMENTS
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoA good poem, concise and to the point.
One suggested change: As the poem is about the narrator expressing his lover is affecting his state of mind etc, wouldn't it be better if the second stanza read:
You walk the chambers of my heart.
It's hard for me when we're apart.
You prowl the corners of my mind.
No wonder you're on it all the time!
Just a thought.
