- Erotic Poetry
- Woman, woman
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Click hereImages that come to me
Unexpectedly,
Like glowing embers
In the smouldering fire of my love
Woman for woman.
Sweet dreams
Of resplendent beauty
That light the darkest caverns of my mind;
That excite and thrill my whole being,
Leaving me drained -
Fit only for uneasy sleep.
Longing,
Despairing,
Hopeful but fearful
Of this unspeakable love,
Woman for woman.
A love that cherishes and adores,
That needs and desires,
That dreams and sighs,
That breathes and feels
As any love.
But must stay hidden,
Must wear the mask of innocent friendship.
Must survive
If at all,
On the scraps of affection
Gleaned, I from her,
Woman from woman
- COMMENTS
mismusedover 19 years agoYour poetry is, to me, the essence of poetry, that which speaks of what our being is, what is within.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoAnd the fawnster gave you some good advice.
Try taking this:
Leaving me drained -
Fit only for uneasy sleep.
Longing,
Despairing,
Hopeful but fearful
Of this unspeakable love,
Woman for woman.
and doing this to it:
Leaving me drained -
fit only for uneasy sleep
of this unspeakable love,
Woman for woman.
Don't be afraid to leave some words out.
fawniealmost 20 years agothis was wonderful, but if i can give some advice..and only bcuz i'm learning it myself, there's some wasted words..try
tightening up your phrases..make it sharper..it'll help the flow. enjoyable read!
