Wonder

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demure101
demure101
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Time was – a slow awakening: the day
lay colourless before the hour, done up
in streaks of purple cloud. The curtains wide,

the windows open, in the silent room
the world regained its senses, slowly, like
a woman waking up to promised joys

will stretch herself and smile, with in her face
a hint of welcome. Somewhere far away
a car hummed past, an insect's tiny tale

of new proportions. Overhead, the light
grew brighter, and each detail of the room
fell into place; all sights and sounds conspired

to fill me with the wonder of the day,
that, while no different from all others, felt
as if some sleeping grief had gone away.

demure101
demure101
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Peace

very nice, needs (some) slight revisions to get that killer flow. Don't know about stars but this deserves a big happy face.

DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
Wow!

I love this poem about awakenings! My favorite stanza is the last one, and my favorite line has to be this one: "felt/as if some sleeping grief had gone away."

DesejoDesejoalmost 12 years ago
I like this very much

The hyphen in the first line confuses me, but overall I like the idea, the language and the rhythm of this piece.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
DO OPEN WINDOWS

have screens. TK U MLJ LV NV