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work(shop) in progress


and her throat felt full with the
 pressure from the collar he
  slid and buckled
         then
  tugged her to the place
      where He would
          lavish
      her with pain

as his fingers thrust up
  inside her
  long, shiny tendrils
  of
  juice
  poured
  over his hand and onto the
  slick concrete floor

toes twirled in tiny circles
  searching
  for purchase
    as
   the
   crack
   of the paddle struck
  swollen skin, echoes
  bounced off the walls

she
 is helplessly trussed
 -ankles, wrists, open, exposed
 waiting…

…for completion

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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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I see a few things I'd work on but, overall, it's good. And it's not easy to write good bdsm erotica.