Would you?

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Hey everyone, well this is my first submission, written in about five minutes.
There is some structure to it, but not much and i really did not mean it to.
Constructive criticism will be appreciated.
Neko

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I try to look at her and then suddenly realise she is not there.
Why do I have to try so hard and still get nothing??

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there are times when i don't quite realise how badly i need you, you seem so... so drawn out and thinly spread that i sometimes wonder why i am here...
the pain i feel for you to be so distant from me.
i think i should just disappear, maybe just fade slowly away...
would you notice?
would you?

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