Wreaths

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demure101
demure101
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Dawn comes in wreaths; a thin day
with a drizzle. Under my tyres'
slow progress wet cobbles tell
the wrong story - a borrowed yarn

I don't care to hear, all substance
elsewhere, lost, far beyond
the bare fields, the dry river and
the blue-grey hills, treeless, keen

as a knife's edge - till the drone
slides down the back of my mind
where my dreams lie, going grubby
and grey with mould. This, then,

is how we die, when the long years
pass unneedful, the days shrunk to
a mere sequence of rituals
with clouds in the morning, and rain.

demure101
demure101
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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Recalls the words "not with a bang but a whimper"

A fine antidote to the excess and sometimes grotesque sexuality that populates these boards. Well done. You get better and better.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Paradox

The poem is beautiful in a very sad and poignant way, which takes in both the beauty of funeral wreaths, and the reason for their use.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
PEOPLE ALWAYS RECOGNIZE MORTALITY

they just dont visualize it when it comes, TK U MLJ LV NV