Writen fear

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rikaaim
rikaaim
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Am I a writer?

I like to think so.

But when the words won’t come out,

And when my story lacks flow,

How can I claim to be a master,

And let my talent show?

My words stumble, fumble, and falter.

My grammar is appalling.

My spelling leaves me balling.

My passion wants to soar.

My words want to roar.

To show the world my ideas,

And dismiss my writing fears,

Is my one true goal.

In my head there is this hole

Which is the place were my ability seems to go.

Is this any good?

I doubt it.

rikaaim
rikaaim
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Intoxcy8meIntoxcy8mealmost 4 years ago
really great work

My passion wants to soar.

My words want to roar.

2 very powerful lines that I really enjoyed

I would like you to know I reread this piece over and over great talent

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
There you go...

just let it all out... ranting is good for you, I think.

eroticdream1120eroticdream1120over 17 years ago
True freedom is a blank piece of paper.

Just let go baby.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Very true.

Conveys the doubts and uncertainty all of us writers often have about our ability to produce good material.

The_FoolThe_Foolabout 19 years ago
I Feel your pain

Writing sucks from the aspect of one's ego. You have some good lines in here. Once again, I would suggest a little paring down and maybe breaking it up into stanzas, strophes or whatever you want to call them. Once again, the hardest part of editing is trying not to wad it up and throw it in the trash can, or at least it is for me.

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