- Erotic Poetry
- Writhing
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Waves of aching desire
Insistently caress me
Flowing from head
To toe
Looking in your eyes
Electicity sparks
Heart races, breathlessly
Your gaze holds me
Almost painful
This intense
Burning
Piercing need
Wanting to be
Alone with you
Touching you
Pleasuring you
Holding you
Eyes meeting
Locking together
As you make me scream
You have this effect on me
That no one else does
You make my entire body
Tingle and smoulder
Intense passion
Your touch intoxicates
A craving satisfied yet
Yearning for more
Time means nothing
When I am with you
An infinity of rapture
As our bodies tremble and join.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 18 years agoWild abandon and passion
Weakened by use of too many gerunds (-ing);
Consider, as an example:
"Almost painful
This intense
Burning
Piercing need"
Could be more potent as:
"Almost painful
This intense
Need pierces
Burns"
Just a suggestion. Gerunds have their place in soft romantic pieces.
