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I drink my breakfast
face to face
with friend dismay
coffee stained cup
of coke and courage
just another fucking day
Michael H. Bodor
Copyright © 2011
I like your alternate version,
But mine was written the way that best describes the memory that spawned it and your changes would obliterate the message entirely...
Thanks Anyway...
I'm gonna play with it because I can't resist, but you have permission to hate what I do or delete.
Yet again
I drink my breakfast
and face the face
of stained courage,
black grounds swimming uphill.
My friend dismay
just a lovely fucking day