- Non-Erotic Poetry
- You Don't Know Me
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Click hereI look around me.
I see people- beautiful people.
Then me.
They don't know me.
They don't know what I want,
What I need,
What I feel.
They don't know me.
I'm hiding.
I'm not a 'good' girl.
I don't want to be.
They don't know me.
I'm lying.
I cannot be true to them.
I need to be.
They don't know me.
I'm crying.
I bottle up my feelings;
I have to let them out.
They don't know me.
I am not what you think I am.
You don't know me.
- COMMENTS
annaswirlsabout 14 years agoGood start, this reads like a warm up to the poem where you tell us who you are.... to let us know You... you tell us we do not know you but then lose the opportunity to introduce your true self. But like I said, good start, really, it is essential that you write this kind of statement in order to get the courage to paint a self portrait with the details that are so unique that they could be used to identify what you consider "you."
Cheerio-
Anna
