- Erotic Poetry
- You know you want to
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would you be in shock
if I grabbed your cock
how would you feel
if you saw me kneel
makes me want to suck
now I need to fuck
wouldn't it be great
to watch me masturbate
would you rather drink my juice
or put your neck into a noose
tell me the truth
you want to fuck me in the ass, don't you?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 16 years agoSo far everything I've read has been great. It's refreshing to read another writers work; and yours injects a gamut of emotions; as well as finding a word or phrase that also adds a very real sense of humor to experiences so deeply passionate.
Good on ya. Keep it up.
Wolvesheart.
Maria2394over 17 years agonormally, I dont care much for rhyme, but you did it well, and yeah, the end, shocked me, ( I said, the END)
you did a good job!!
I am truly enjoying reading you. just went back through your poems list and read six or seven of them. you have a terrific sense of humor and I look forward to more of your work
hugs
maria
KOLKOREover 17 years agoWas it more of an erotic - shocking poem or more of a shocking poem which happened to be about...you can read for yourself! I'll give it its due respect for its smart structure (we were quickly warned about the shock right at the begining). Those who did not want/ dared to make a comment (is that because it's a woman's voice who talks 'like that'? Tssst.. Not in Literotica! Or maybe there are not enough allusions to Frost to warrant a comment?
Thank you, and I am ready to be shocked again (now, you'll have to find a new way though).
