tagNon-Erotic PoetryYou Promised

You Promised

bySeeker n Finder©

You looked me in the eye,
said all would be fine.
YOU PROMISED!

I did my part,
prayed with all my heart.
YOU PROMISED!

Then Christmas came,
they all said the same.
THEY PROMISED!

Drew you a picture card,
continued to pray real hard.
YOU ALL PROMISED!

Dad looked me in the eye,
tearfully told me all's not fine.
HE PROMISED!

I was told God looked you in the eye,
said it was time to say good bye.
YOU PROMISED!!!!
but you all promised..........

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