- Erotic Poetry
- You Swallow
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This is part of me
This is my ultimate joy
This is your power
This is the look on my face
This is knowing for real
This is knowing the pleasure you give me
This is knowing you have been more
More than I can take
More than I can stand
YOU make my eyes roll back
You make me tremble
You make me moan
You make me cum
You make my eyes smile down on you
You make me fall back in the bed
You please me
You remember
You remember my words
You smile with half of me dripping from your chin
You shake your head and laugh
You look into my eyes
You smile
You close your mouth
You swallow
You know
You know what you did.
- COMMENTS
greeneyeredheadover 19 years agoI love how your stories and this poem give life to the power that a woman feels from pleasing
AndiAndersover 19 years agoThe structure of this poem lends a hard hitting drive that matches the experience being described. Very appropriate. Good choice in very short sentences, and the repetitive opening words pile momentum higher with each line.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoA most pleasant early mornig read. Kicked my sleepy imagination into overdrive. i do enjoy Your work.....enigma
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoyes I know what I do, to my own sir ;) I love your poems Sir Nathan, really and truly
