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Click hereYou want to know what I like?
You really, really do?
You want to know what I like
I’ll tell you in a verse or two.
I would like you to hold me close
And feel your hands on me
I would like to hold you close
Those feelings I love so much
I would like you to hold me close
Your body so soft I see
I would like to hold you close
Your fingers caress and touch
Your lips and your kisses I love
I can feel them on my breast
Your lips and kisses I love
On my face and on my skin
Your lips and your kisses I love
I want you to give me the rest
Your lips and kisses I love
Please baby, I want you to come in
My being is tingling and stirring
Your soft fingers I can feel explore
My body is tingling, singing
Those fingers are doing what’s right
My being is tingling and stirring
I can feel them close to the door
My being is tingling, singing
I want you, I will not fight
I can feel you become so excited
I am moist and warm and wet
I can feel you become excited
Please baby, I can’t wait any more
I can feel you become so excited
My love, I am ready and set
I can feel you become excited
You know what we are here for
Your hardness is so warm against me
It sends shivers so deep inside
Your hardness so warm against me
As you gently push and shove
Your hardness is so warm inside me
I clench as you bury and hide
Your hardness is warm inside me
As you make me cum, my love.
And now you now what I like
You really really do
You now know what I like
I told you in a verse or two.
poppin.....may I make a suggestion...try working in free verse...you sound like you're straining to maintain a rhyme every other line...relax a little...let your mind open up...let the thoughts flow without worrying about finding the right rhyming word...
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thanks for the journey~
your terrible crappy poems! <<<<<
the fish is on a rampage? sorry poppin
some will rub ya like sand paper in life,
like leaning tired against a jagged rock
you want to know what I like?
I like nicer critics <grin>
then there are those into more
self devastating remarks
You want to know what I like?
I liked your poem~
Will never be a poet, pls give up now and spare us all your terrible crappy poems!