- Erotic Poetry
- Your Body
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Click hereYour Body (I)
yours is the oxymoron body
the pliant firmness of your buttocks
the yielding demands of your hands
the soft resistance of your breasts
the cool fire of your thighs
the fierce surrender of your kisses
a bewildering enticement
to be plundered, to be treasured
to be cradled, to be pressed
to be admired and to be entered
- COMMENTS
ArjayEiffover 11 years agoAuthorGood point, and with the benefit of your objective lens, I'm now feeling a little disappointed in the last two lines. Plundered and treasured roughly maintain the oxymoron conceit, and cradled / pressed is close (but could be better); admired / entered is just not at the same game.
Needs think time.
Desejoover 11 years agoInteresting concept, and a brave move to associate a word like oxymoron with a woman's body. I think the last line is weak, however. There is not much of a contraction between admired and entered - how about ending it with something like:
to hear your screams, and sighs?
ArjayEiffover 11 years agoAuthorhttp://www.tumblr.com/blog/arjayeiff
about 1/3 of the way down
