tagErotic PoetryYour breath

Your breath

byAmusedMusings©

Your breath
feels like
butterflies
on my neck

I await
the butterflies
between my legs

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by AmusedMusings03/02/13

it's meant...

to create anticipation.

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by erectus12303/02/13

go for it

nice, but don't stop, the directness of request is strong, confident and appealing; however I think a climax is always in order.....

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