Your Eyes Are On Me

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JUDO
JUDO
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Your eyes are on me.
I can feel them through my blouse.
They look and search with radar's stealth
But terminally, I act cool on guarded watch.
Look, but don't touch.

Across the room, they sweep the hills
Roll over my curves
To search the crannies.
Your hair glints through smoke filled haze,
Near the bar, by the door - third stool from the end.

A chill, was it?
I reacted just the same.
Your eyes are on me.
Shivering up my spine.
The cool grows cold, then hot.

A want of silver liquid desire
Flushes me, engulfs me, I know not why.
Why you? Why me? Why now? Why talk?
When palms over knuckles let me know
I'm not paying.

JUDO
JUDO
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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
my eyes are open...

here and the last two lines are absolutely priceless. i'm glad that i took a look.....nice work......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Some of the comments....

...won't open completely but I'm betting they're positive. This is lovely and the last two lines are the perfect ending. A 5 but worth more.

Tess

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
liked it

Loved the last 2 lines,

a really nice read.

thanks.

~ J

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
look but don't touch~

bummer ... nice poem