- Erotic Poetry
- Your Tongue
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Click hereLike a tendril your tongue
trails down from the
balcony of my breasts,
falling forward freely,
it hangs and drags
in the small pool
at my center which fills
slowly with the salty sweat
made by our steady rocking.
I shift, causing it
to sway further out,
its sticky end inclined
to cling onto any new
surface it finds. It seeks
to bond, hold fast
to the tiny hard ledge
its come upon, so sure
of the rhythmic
thrill hidden there.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 13 years agowhen i was reading it i wanted to read more, it needs alonger ending ,it's a great story, it would make me quiver and tremble,I love the tongue
twelveooneabout 16 years agoTake out what is not needed-
the tendril of your tongue/
trails down from the/
balcony of my breasts,/
so sure/ a thrill/
is hidden/
Tendrils from a balcony - nice working, explore that further.
