- Erotic Poetry
- Yours
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i feel Your gaze on me
Tangible and real
And i can't meet Your eyes
Your voice is soft
Yet powerful
As You say my name
And the rain taps softly
Against the glass
As You touch me
Your lips find mine
Insistently
i return Your kiss
Clumsily
And i flush
Wondering how
i would be deserving
Of such attention
my body responds
And You need to stop
But i don't want You to
i want you to take
What is Yours
And leave me nothing
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoDiscuss. I loved the poem, thanks.
Master_Vylealmost 14 years agoBeautiful poem will worth five stars. Do not worry over someone nit-picking over an i for an I. you know how you meant it, and it was correct. Keep writing they way you feel and let no one tell you that you should change it for the sake it would look better in a poem. Looking forward to more from you.
-Master Vyle
fridayamalmost 14 years agoa poet (by his/her nature in command of language) can self-abnegate themselves as to capitalize you and not I. Whatever your submissive feelings, this is wrong--poetically--and your poetry won't improve until the I is capitalized and meant.
