zen of a snail

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a snail crawls
from enlightenment
seeking darkness
sucking at everything
in order to be moved

hiding from everyone
finding comfort
in the shadows
unable to come out
of their shell

if you look
for the trail
of 'ooey goo'
they leave behind
you'll find
the zen of a snail

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MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailalmost 18 years ago
Consider it karmic law

Everthing you do comes back to you.

This was left on mine:

what a load..

00 04/24/06 By: Anonymous

of crap. mocking all Lit poems with another nothing submission / comments that diminish all other comments

-RJ-

Why say you, Oh Hypocrites?

seranadeseranadealmost 18 years ago
grasshopper

snails, grasshoppers and crows. You been in the back pasture agin aint'cha

alby-reading

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 18 years ago
Satire ... Humor ~

Loving it and you know it. I always get your humor and it amazes me, ya get so much flack for it. Joining the crowd there with ya my friend ~ Thanks for the journey and watch out for that goooooo ~

*grins and flurbers ya ~!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
That's enlightening!

I know you are being sarastic in posting this, but it is still a good poem. :D