Zero-Gravity Tea Ceremony

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Told you can come no further
for your papers aren't yet dry
I fixed him with an icy glare
and I'll explain here why.

I'm battered and I'm broken
my eyebrow doesn't seem to fit,
a crunching in my toe bone
where it's lost it's cosy knit.

This voyage through the ozone
makes the ear drums burst
you've the effrontery to tell me
that I can't relieve my thirst.

Well

he bowed his head before me
you could see I'd got to him
a man that's here before
with supposedly no sin.

Pots were quickly gathered
with cups dainty and sky blue,
the kettle soon was boiling
in the saucer cookies too.

We sat round in a circle
on the comfiest of clouds
balancing the feast on
the remnants of my shrouds.

As we sat replete and smiling
thunder crashed across the sea
I said don't be taking on so,
Lad come and have some tea.

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Poets Choice Trigger 45

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 15 years ago
Damn!

You're so grear with these tricky triggers. This is wonderfully funny.<p> Tess

AngelineAngelinealmost 15 years ago
You are a clever girl, you are!

You did a wonderful job with what is, arguably, the most difficult of the Survivor triggers. I love it when you rhyme; it's comes so naturally to you and makes for a silky smooth read. There's an "it's" that I think should be an "its," but maybe it is my misread. You done good, Annie. :-) xo, S.

bluebellbluebellalmost 15 years ago
Zero-gravity awesomeness

Kooky, Annie, real kooky! But gooooood. As are you, love. Thank you for sharing this.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
Heavenly humor

Never would have thought of this solution to the trigger (I'd go for a spaceship or something). And your rhymes work so well !

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
Heavenly humor

Never would have thought of this solution to the trigger (I'd go for a spaceship or something). And your rhymes work so well !

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