zmp~ dancing leaves

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ZMP~ dancing leaves

Caught up in a swirling breeze
dancing
is a leaf before me

Spinning around
and around
then settling down

it will move an inch
then another
before spiraling again

twirling on its edge
ten laying down
becoming a lifeless beige

gusted away
by a strong wind
along comes another leaf...
Dancing ~

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Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
**5**

Why is it so long between ZMPs??? You do them soo well!!! & I like them best of all you do!!! Please MORE ZMA!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*you have been mentioned on today's review

rhyme and rhythm...are the wind that makes this one dance in all the colors of fall..nice images...blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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They do dance so well

Especially when the rake comes out

And they flee to play...

Just one question - ten???? (or then?)